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PostSubject: Mysterious town    Sat Jul 05, 2014 2:55 pm

This fan fiction is about 5 best friends that go a town called "Mysterious town " they spent the whole summer there . The girl called Katherine takes her 4 best friends with her . Elena , Bonnie , Caroline and Rebekah . Together they find a mysterious book that is for magical creatures and soon they discover that they are fairies and they fight with evil monsters , witches and wizards ! Expect they're story soon !

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PostSubject: Re: Mysterious town    Sat Jul 05, 2014 6:38 pm

THE VAMPIRE DIARIES!!!! Thought Katherine is not a friend of Bonnie,Caroline,Elena and Rebecka.
Anyways I love the idea!

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PostSubject: Re: Mysterious town    Sat Jul 05, 2014 7:06 pm

Well only get the names cause I love them *_* but anyway the idea for the fic is not for tvd Smile

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PostSubject: Re: Mysterious town    Sat Jul 05, 2014 8:40 pm

Well that's a bummer but I really like your idea!

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PostSubject: Re: Mysterious town    Sun Jul 06, 2014 7:43 am

Katherine with normal clothes :


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Caroline with normal clothes :


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Elena with normal clothes :


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Bonnie with normal clothes :


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PostSubject: Re: Mysterious town    Sun Jul 06, 2014 9:34 am

Mysterious town episode 1 : The begging ( spoiler)


So what should we expect ? The five girls come into the town and go into Katherine's country house and her parents open the summer supermarket . The girls are excited go visit the town and a group of witches attacks them ! What will the girls going to do will they safe them selfs or some of them will find to make them all safe ?

The girls we're traveling to the town . Kathrine was playing on her phone , Rebekah was reading a magazine , Caroline and Bonnie we're reading and Elena was listening to music . The girls finally arrived they we're really excited Katherine's parents opened the supermarket and the girls went to see the town and eat pizza . After that they played games in the pizza bar . Kathrine and Bonnie went out to they went  to a dark street and heard someone talking the other three girls saw them and called them Katherine and Bonnie watched them and didn't say a thing .
- I'm Martina and those are my sisters Irena and Daniela and we are witches ! - Screamed Martina and attacked with ice .
- Bonnie watch out ! Oh no ! - Screamed Kathrine and there was fire shield around them.

After that Bonnie exploded in morphix energy . ( sorry I couldn't find an image.)
The witches we're down .
- What now ?! - Asked Bonnie.
-RUN ! - Screamed Katherine . The girls called the others and went home and told them what happend and they knew that from today nothing will be the same .

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PostSubject: Re: Mysterious town    Sun Jul 06, 2014 5:32 pm

Mysterious town episode 2 : The mystery book


The girls find a mystery book that's written for a thousands of magical creatures ! Fairies, witches,monsters and wizards the girls read the fairy chapter and knew about all fairy transformations and they discover they are fairies , but the witches sent a pack of wolfs to revenge Kathrine and Bonnie Elena , Caroline and Rebekah must protect there friends by using there powers will some of them find a knew power inside of her .?

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PostSubject: Re: Mysterious town    Sun Jul 06, 2014 5:55 pm

Some of the images you've used to portray your characters are fanart, and therefore, there needs to be credit of some sort in your posts. If you don't know who the artists are, I'd suggest you to remove all kinds of fanart from this topic and replace them with official images.

Also, I've merged some of your posts together because there was a ridiculously small time span between them. Please use the edit feature next time you want to add something.

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PostSubject: Re: Mysterious town    Sun Jul 06, 2014 6:28 pm

As a writer, this feels rather poorly constructed. The summary before the chapter isn't needed since it takes away from the chapter as a whole. There is a lot of telling of the story, but not showing of what really happens. There is no real introduction of the characters, we know nothing really about them other than they are just winx look a likes. Sorry if I'm coming across as being negative and mean, but I can see talent that can bubble up if you use the advice. Add in details as you can, because without them, the story just seems rather...flat.

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