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 Kayla, Fairy of the Sparkling Flame

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PostSubject: Kayla, Fairy of the Sparkling Flame   Mon Aug 10, 2015 4:01 am

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Name:Kayla
Age:17
Gender: Female
Creature: Fairy
Allegiance: Good Guys
Race:Planteressia
Origins: Magic User
Powers: Sparkling Flame
Spells: Fire Energy (high)-can get fire in her environment or make her own fire and "shoot" it at her opponent. The attack renders the opponent powerless for 1 minute while they heal from the burns.
Fire Wall (high)-can make a fire wall to block her opponent. The wall can be as much as 18-20 metres high. It can either be used as a shield or it can trap an enemy by surrounding them, making them unable to escape  from or dodge it by shocking and burning those who pass through it. The wall lasts for 2 minutes.
Hot Spring (low)-able to burn her opponent temporarily with scalding heat. This pain lasts for 50 seconds. 
Fire of Life (medium)-can help heal someone's bodily injuries a little faster with heat, In cold conditions, this spell can prevent someone from getting hypothermia since it provides heat resistance with fire to the cold.
Fire Illusion (low)-This is mainly a scare tactic spell. It can create fake fire around an opponent, so that that they are scared to move. The illusion lasts for 1 minute
Fire Travel (medium)-creates a mobile "vehicle" that allows the spell caster to move away from opponent. The vehicle can take someone up to 2 miles away in 1 minute.
Flying Sparks (medium)-Shoots sparks at opponents as much as 10 metres away. Tranquilizes them so that they are unconscious and unable to move for 30 seconds.
Appearance:
Kayla has brown hair. She has green eyes and red lips. Her Winx outfit is a orangeish/yellowish dress with boots of similar color. She wears a heart shaped necklace given to her by her mom.

Strengths:. She has the best grades in her science classes, especially physics/thermodynamics. As a child, she learned the best ways for people to save energy, how to use natural resources such as gas and electricity, and how metabolism in the body uses heat. She is also very athletic because of her fast reaction time and upper body strength that she developed from her training. She can read people's emotions well.
Weaknesses: She easily gets angry when life doesn't go her way and doesn't like to admit to others when she's wrong due to her stubborn nature and pride. She can also be too competitive in sports.
Personality: She is a headstrong and stubborn girl. Since Kayla has fire powers, she is interested in how heat relates to physics. She is heavily interested in how physics affects the universe, especially in how her powers affect the world around her. Because she is stubborn, she might appear to be impolite on the surface. However, she hides her social phobia and is really more vulnerable and nicer than she seems. She also has a tendency to lash out at people for no reason. She is very knowledgeable about the universe due to the research, projects, and studying about the physical world that she did as a child. Kayla is well versed in how thermodynamics affects the climate on Planteressia, electricity, the orbit of the the two moons of Planteressia, the length of how long fire can burn, and friction. She bestows people with her intelligence by teaching them how to save energy in their homes and about talking to people about thermodynamics. She is very good at abstract thinking due to her affinity for the sciences.  

History: 
17 years ago Kayla was born on the planet of Planteressia, to two parents and two twin sisters, Magica and Lisa. She was the second triplet to be born and her parents knew there was something special about her.  Her mother hoped she would be a powerful fairy just like her and made her a heart necklace when she was 18  months old to signify her love for her. On her 4th birthday, she received her pet rabbit, Lila, as a gift. She was always exposed to the magical world, since her family was full of fairies including her parents, and wizards. As a kid, her sisters always made fun of her because they got their powers at a young age, except for her. When she started school at Planteressia Elementary, the teachers were worried she would not catch up to the other kids. The parents were worried she never get her powers. When she was 8, one night she overheard her parents talking about this and she became sad, worried, and fearful. From that moment on, she tried to show her family and peers that she could be strong even without her magic. 
It was difficult for her at first. She developed a social phobia when she was younger because people made fun of her for her inability to cast spells and her clumsiness. She also developed a stubborn and mean disposition with a tendency to lash out at others because she tried to act tough as she was constantly being bullied. She developed a lack of confidence and low self-esteem because of her magical deficiencies. 


One day, at lunchtime when she was eating, a group of kids threw eggs at her and cursed her. The fairy ran home crying and refused to go to school for 2 weeks, though she went against her will. As she was sitting alone in the backyard, crying and depressed one afternoon, her mother came up to her and explained how she was slow to develop her powers and because of that, it contributed to her clumsiness. Kayla remembered the most important thing her mother said, "Never give up." From that day on, that was her motto. Nevertheless, Kayla still struggled with proving herself in other areas besides magic. 


Sports was definitely not an innate talent for the fairy. Though she struggled with coordination, she practiced running and basketball at the gym every night. She improved little by little. Then, in the fifth grade, she wanted to join the track and lacrosse teams. However, the coach and the teams barred her from playing due to her lack of coordination. Kayla needed something to fill up her time and was desperate to avoid staying home alone again without any friends. She begged the coaches to let her on the teams and they did so reluctantly, but she was usually benched. She observed the other people playing on the teams and desired to be part of them. She talked to the coaches and they told her they would her her play if she trained with a star player, Lydia.


Immediately after school, Lydia would train with Kayla. She taught her how to lift weights and do other exercises for upper body strength. Kayla was still not coordinated enough however, and she would often fail to listen to Lydia. The two were often frustrated with each other. Lydia gave her an ultimatum to listen to her or quit the teams and Kayla finally listened. She improved her upper body strength and her coordination skills. The two became friends, though they often fought a lot because of Kayla's abrasive nature. Kayla was still guarded around her and was unwilling to divulge her deepest secrets for fear of rejection. Eventually, they accepted her on the sports teams and she was able to prove herself as a valuable player. Even though she was not as good as Lydia, she was a decent player and some of her classmates recognized her ability. She still experienced bullying on the team and would fight with other members or people when they criticized how she threw or ran. 


Kayla still had few friends, since she would lash out at others, making her unapproachable and because she was not very sociable. In order to make an escape, she delved into her studies. She did very well in academics, especially in her science classes. She explored other areas of the universe, such as physics and thermodynamics. At age 10, she was coming up with her own formulas and doing her own science experiments.. Of course, her intelligence didn't help her get along with her other two sisters, as they were always jealous of how talented and gifted she was in academics and sports. They dubbed her "the worthless triplet" because she was yet to get her powers. Magica and Lisa always insulted her, calling her a "nerd" and "foolish" in front of others because of this or because she made a mistake. This lead to her developing a more stubborn and harsh disposition because she was scared to admit when she needed  help or when she made a mistake and she was scared to show others how smart she was. Also, she never totally got over her social phobia, which is why she hardly let others, even her friend Lydia, see her vulnerable side, and would appear to be abrasive and cocky at times. In class one day she met another fairy named Selena, whom she could relate to. They were both nerds and social outcasts who had very bad social skills. They bonded over this and got along very well. Soon Lydia, Carter, Selena's friend, Selena, and Kayla were all friends.  Kayla got better in sports and became a star player as well, but she developed an overcompetitive air  to make up for her weaknesses, making her lose her two friends, Lydia and Carter. Her only friend was Selena, and she let Kayla cry on her shoulder the day she fought with the other two. She would not see them again for years.


She waited and waited for her powers. As she became a teenager her parents gave up hope that she would get her powers. They decided to enroll her in high school after her 14th birthday. Then one day, something magical happened. She found out about her powers when she was 14 during a thunderstorm when she was scared and she inadvertently  Kayla was shocked that this was happening to her. She noticed that the flames were sparkling. She told her entire family and her sisters did not believe her and laughed at her. Then she showed them the candles and the other two looked at each other and knew at that moment it was definitely magic, since they had no matches or lighters. They had looks of utter shock on their faces upon their realization. The parents were overjoyed and they threw a party for their special daughter. Her two other sisters still resented her at first, but the family got together one day after a long talk, Kayla made up with her sisters and they formed a strong and loving bond. A few months later, she started attending magic school.


Life at the Training Academy:
Once Kayla arrived at the magic academy, she struggled with her coordination once again. This didn't help with her powers, as she often struggled to cast spells and if she did, she would accidentally cast the wrong one. She was not confident with her magic. Her teacher, Mrs. Ferril, saw her predicament and took her under her wings so she could develop her power more . The fairy was eager to look at all the heat spells that she could use in the magic dimension. She attended classes during the day and and magic training in the afternoons and evenings. She experienced the same bullying she dealt with in elementary school because she could not use her powers as well as other students and she again dealt with social isolation. She was always disgraced in public because she would hurt others with her magic. Therefore, she was careful to avoid extracurriculars and other people. It took Kayla a while to get better at using her newly trained powers. She would often fight with Mrs. Ferril and because of her inferiority complex, she would want to do things her own way. Ferril was very understanding and broke things down so Kayla would listen and improve. One day as she was in class, she met another fairy. She introduced herself as Lydia. Soon Lydia remembered the fairy with whom she fought and the two immediately apologized. She called Carter over to see Kayla and they all apologized. They went to lunch and saw Selena and their friendship bond was restored. After she started refining her powers, Ms. Ferril, saw how much she was improving. Kayla still had challenges with spells  but with her mentor's help, she was able to control her magic better. Despite this, she still occasionally has trouble using her Sparkling Flame powers and injures other people accidentally with fire or may burn others. Also, she has become a little more open towards others but is still reserved and scared that others might see her as weak. She is also still not fully confident in her fairy powers. She hopes to one day become an Enchantix fairy and receive the title of Guardian of the Sparkling Flame on her home planet.

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PostSubject: Re: Kayla, Fairy of the Sparkling Flame   Thu Aug 13, 2015 6:19 pm

MK, we need to talk about your history. There are several things in it that will lead to your character being a Mary sue and we do not wish for that. I will list things to point out.

1) The entire thing with her finding her powers and how her sisters acted should be handled better. They shouldn't be act all resentful of her just cuz her parents are happy she finally got her magic.

2) The science stuff, the fact that entire prodigy thing just shows up at age 10 and she never really has to work for it is just pushing it.

3) The sports stuff is pushing it too. She might be clumsy, but she barely has to prove herself before she's considered the best

4) Yeah the guardian thing I will say is a big no cuz the elders shouldn't just give her a title cuz she's unproven and they have no ability to appoint her guardian of anything really. Its given too easily. She'll become a guardian when she reaches and graduates with Enchantix.

Basically, your oc gets everything she wants and barely has to do anything for it. She has no challenge in her life cuz of it.

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PostSubject: Re: Kayla, Fairy of the Sparkling Flame   Thu Aug 13, 2015 8:21 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Kayla, Fairy of the Sparkling Flame   Thu Aug 13, 2015 10:37 pm

MK, here is a question, is the sparkling flame just her fire magic, or is it something more?

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PostSubject: Re: Kayla, Fairy of the Sparkling Flame   Fri Aug 14, 2015 1:54 am

Okay yes. basically with her fire powers, the flames literally sparkle. That's why I called it the sparkling flame. Also she is able to make sparks with her powers aside from fire. 

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PostSubject: Re: Kayla, Fairy of the Sparkling Flame   Fri Aug 14, 2015 3:04 am

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Fire Wall (high)-can make a fire wall to block her opponent. The wall can be as much as 18-20 metres high. It can either be used as a shield or it can trap an enemy, making them unable to escape  from or dodge it by shocking and burning those who pass through it. The wall lasts for 2 minutes.

So it says that the enemy can't escape it, so is it a set of walls that box the opponent in? Or is it just one wall like the description is implying? If it's one wall, can't the opponent run around it, or is the fire capable of spreading out to stop the evasion?

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She has the best grades in her science classes.

Is she good in biological science, chemistry, physics, or all three? If so, is she able to translate her science skills to the real world, like is she able to identify a substance or mineral by looking at its physical features?

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She is also very athletic because of her fast reaction time and upper body strength.

Is she athletic because of her reaction time and body strength, or does she have a fast reaction time and body strength because of her exercising?

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She is not open to working in more artistic or creative areas

This is a weakness because....?

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She is a headstrong and stubborn girl. Since Kayla has fire powers, she is interested in how heat relates to physics. She is heavily interested in how physics affects the universe, especially in how her powers affect the world around her. Because she is stubborn, she might appear to be impolite on the surface. However, she hides her social phobia and is really more vulnerable and nicer than she seems. She also has a tendency to lash out at people for no reason. She is very knowledgeable about the universe bestowing others with her intelligence. She is very good at abstract thinking due to her affinity for the sciences.

A.) How is she knowledgeable about the universe?
B.) How does she "bestow" this knowledge to others?

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PostSubject: Re: Kayla, Fairy of the Sparkling Flame   Fri Aug 14, 2015 3:43 am

Anyone who has fire abilities can make a spark. A spark is just the start of a fire.

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PostSubject: Re: Kayla, Fairy of the Sparkling Flame   Fri Aug 14, 2015 3:48 am

Updated and it wasn't just sparks. Her flames are able to literally sparkle. 

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PostSubject: Re: Kayla, Fairy of the Sparkling Flame   Sat Aug 15, 2015 12:07 am

also how does firewall shock someone when it has no electrical elements to it?

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